Tuesday 3 December 2019

The Duck Story


The past week Ngahere have been doing adventure stories The class voted on where the setting should be and what happens we all did a plan and then we started making it.

I enjoyed Making the story and writing some of the stuff that happens
I found challenging linking the slides because I just learnt today
Next time I want to write my own story and pick what happens

1 comment:

  1. Ka rawe Jacob! I love your introduction and how you have added lots of details. Maybe you could add more details to your other options so your story is in paragraphs.
    Keep up the great work!

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.