Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Paroa School in Greymouth, NZ.
Ka mau te wehi Jacob. This is a great piece of work. Interesting that you would use your invisibility for evil rather than good. Maybe next time you could add more options after invisibility and show what different directions that story could go.
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Ka mau te wehi Jacob. This is a great piece of work. Interesting that you would use your invisibility for evil rather than good. Maybe next time you could add more options after invisibility and show what different directions that story could go.
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