Thursday, 18 October 2018

Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu

2 comments:

  1. I like… that you have a lot of information about yourself.
    Next time… you may want to add punctuation so your writing isn't just a big long sentence.
    Question…. Maybe you could teach me how to make a speech bubble so I could make my work more interesting.

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    1. okay thanks for the feedback

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